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Torn [remix]

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Tears are running down my cheek
The proove that I am weak
they are burning on my skin
that became so thin
on this cold winterday.
I just wanna drift away
Snow is lying everywhere
Yet you are not there
The birds are singing.
How intriguing
I'm standing there in front of you
I wish you could see me too.
don't know what to say anymore
why did you closed the door?
I want to go home
but not alone
cauuse something is holding me there
A pain I cant bear
I don't want to leave you.
But there is nothing I can do!
Other than looking down,at the candle
It s you leaving, I cant handle
Am I strong enough for waving ?
Not yet, I am torn between going and staying.
:iconlisannapple: added some more lines to this [link]
And I totally love how it turned out!!! It's so much better than the few lines I have written!!
And it describes so much better how I/she/we feel!! :heart:
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I just added a few details, the main contribution was on your part!!!! :*